First Love


Our love took off even though our 
wings were too fragile to fly.
Neither knew it would take us 
soaring into the sky.
With hearts full of love, our spirits 
ascend.
Ignoring advice given and words of 
caution, we chose not to listen and 
refused to descend.

Our young souls never dreamt that
 love could wane or fade.
We were both sure that neither 
would break the promises we had 
made.
The fire was untamed but then 
settled and continued on a steady
 flame,
Until the first storm broke, and you 
cast the first blame.

Without hesitation, the arrows came,
I watched how quickly you tore the 
picture from the frame.
Eyes once filled with love were 
welled with tears,
How trust changed into doubts and 
whispers turned into shouts, all so 
unfair.

Confused and shaken after that first 
hurdle, we were in a daze.
Too young to understand that being 
in love wasn't only about happy 
days.
Both were stubborn to let the traces 
of our differences dissolve,
Nothing got resolved.

But the imprint of this, my first love,
remains firm, for it was pure and 
true.
It reminds me of a blissfully happy 
time that I once knew.

by Zyrool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/28/2024 11:48:00 PM
It's sad it ended. It is a beautiful poem with gentle rhyme.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/29/2024 1:55:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Hilda. decades on it still makes my heart soft. Sending the Lord’s Peace and Blessings your way, Have a great rest of the week, my friend.
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