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First Love

It was a sunny,bright day when I saw you You just gave me a smile and went I was fallen in your smile You just opened the door of love in my heart But I know it was early to love someone Because we were in grade 1,but as the days pass I got closer to you. After years we got separated by class division you stopped talking to me but I had the same love even though whole school loved you. On my last day of school. It was 2016,grade 6 It was a concert that day. I came with a bouquet to give you,but I was feared that will you reject me But I saw you was searching someone, I saw a worry of losing something in your eyes I just shared the chocolate with my best friend and kept the bouquet on the wall and said I will propose her one day. But now I am searching you everywhere because it’s been 6 years. I don’t know whether you forgot me or not , but I will never forget you until death

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Date: 1/7/2023 12:09:00 PM
What a lovely verse with so much love and longing, Mugilesh. I enjoyed reading your Valentin Card. Congratulations on your win in Bobby's contest. Have a blessed day my friend
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Mugilesh Shanmugavel
Date: 1/22/2023 11:46:00 PM
Thank you very much But I have a doubt what happens after getting glory in competition
Date: 1/6/2023 8:51:00 PM
"I don’t know whether you forgot me or not , but I will never forget you until death" - Beautiful and dedicated verses. Congratulations!
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Mugilesh Shanmugavel
Date: 1/23/2023 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much

Book: Shattered Sighs