First Love

The flashlight was too dark to be noticed
And the passion was too young to die forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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May 9, 2020 at 11:48 PM
i like this. Open to be read as "LOve under the LIGHT ... flashlight, that is." Yes, youth never quit on love if there is interest on both sides." shalom, shalOM. anil s. deo
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May 11, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Hello Anil, thanks for your comment and I aprreciate
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