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First Love

The flashlight was too dark to be noticed And the passion was too young to die forever

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Date: 5/9/2020 11:48:00 PM
i like this. Open to be read as "LOve under the LIGHT ... flashlight, that is." Yes, youth never quit on love if there is interest on both sides." shalom, shalOM. anil s. deo
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John Kazadi
Date: 5/11/2020 10:25:00 AM
Hello Anil, thanks for your comment and I aprreciate

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