Guneet Singh Poet Rhyme

First Look At My Love

I saw you today with a lovely brightened smile
I felt you today in the morning for a while
My heart pounds, My heart sings
That your beauty has no endings

I heard you today of voice sweetened and mellow
I felt you today but couldn't even say a 'hello'
My ear drums roll with my heart on the whole
That you're my everything

I touched you today on your lips for a while
I missed you today every inch of the mile
My heart aches, My heart makes
That you're my lovey dovey

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Jack Ross Jr. July 21, 2011 at 9:24 AM outstanding.........Jack

Jack Ross Jr. July 15, 2011 at 1:58 PM sweet, loving,raw emotion,cute,light yet deep. I really Like this! Thanks for your kind words on Women, much appreciated!

Jack Horne July 15, 2011 at 1:25 PM What a lovely romantic piece, Guneet

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 15, 2011 at 12:14 PM wonderful rhymes in this emotional write Guneet ..much fervor and luv exudes in every line.. appreciate your sweet comments on my poetry luv..