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First Look At My Love

I saw you today with a lovely brightened smile
I felt you today in the morning for a while
My heart pounds, My heart sings
That your beauty has no endings

I heard you today of voice sweetened and mellow
I felt you today but couldn't even say a 'hello'
My ear drums roll with my heart on the whole
That you're my everything

I touched you today on your lips for a while
I missed you today every inch of the mile
My heart aches, My heart makes
That you're my lovey dovey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2011 9:24:00 AM
outstanding.........Jack
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:58:00 PM
sweet, loving,raw emotion,cute,light yet deep. I really Like this! Thanks for your kind words on Women, much appreciated!
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:25:00 PM
What a lovely romantic piece, Guneet
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:14:00 PM
wonderful rhymes in this emotional write Guneet ..much fervor and luv exudes in every line.. appreciate your sweet comments on my poetry luv..
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