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First Light Haiku No 32

Chilly reflections
Grace the lake with pinks and blues
Midst rocks and headlands

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Eamon Duffin

January 8, 2011 at 7:00 AM

Hi D. Another masterpiece from the first lady of Haiku

Eiken Laan

January 7, 2011 at 7:15 AM

The pinks and blues of the snow skies have been so beautiful in December, this is a wonderful haiku on those colours. I have lots of photos, went out every day - I am almost an expert on clouds now LOL. I love haiku also.

John Freeman

March 8, 2010 at 7:14 AM

Deirdre, Congratulations with this one. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Sean Kelly

March 1, 2010 at 8:57 AM

Déirdre , you always light up the day , with your classy Haikus . Well deserved place in the winners circle ...

Debbie Guzzi

February 22, 2010 at 5:07 PM

a chilly write....shiver..Light & Love

Caryl Muzzey

February 21, 2010 at 5:19 PM

Congratulations on placing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl

February 21, 2010 at 2:39 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your contest win. Enjoy your honor. Nice use of imagery in your poem. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen