Jerry Brotherton Poet Free verse

First Kisses

I would love to say, 
I saw lightning flashing,
heard thunder rolling,
fireworks exploding in the air,
like on ‘Love American Style’.

But I was too busy, 
shaking and sweating.

Television and realty, 
are never quite the same.

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 11, 2026 at 10:46 AM Hello jerry, yes you are right. t.v. and reality is not the same. have a nice day my friend. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith January 1, 2026 at 12:35 PM I enjoyed reading your fun "First Kisses" write. Guess every one was shaking/sweating back then. Have A Very Blessed New Year Writing Away.............. Jerry Brotherton January 2, 2026 at 8:39 AM At least I didn't pass out. These days I'll shake and sweat just walking across the room.

Tom Cunningham January 1, 2026 at 10:29 AM Lol, you're not alone there Jerry, I still shudder when I think back . Tom Jerry Brotherton January 2, 2026 at 8:35 AM May we never forget those fond memories.