First Kiss

Come here was the motion
That rendered her helpless 
And placed her under a majestic 
spell

Quiet eyes, half parted lips 
Dampening like rose petals 
Waiting to collect It's first 
drops of morning dew

And a heart that flutters 
Like hummingbird wings 
As it delectably feasts 
Upon its precious nectar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Beautifully written...love the imagery!
Matose Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 1:11 PM
CLASSICAL AND ROMANTIC. I ENJOYED IT. THANKS...JM
Barton Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Thank you
Mcdaid Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:55 PM
AMAZING BEAUTIFUL PIECE I TIP THE HAT TO ITS BEAUTY
Barton Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Liam very encouraging words always thank you -Maddie
Tacito Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 12:08 PM
This was delicious w/that small tease of seduction. Ah, the simple pleasures. Excellent job!
Barton Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Love speaks to the heart, I just listen thank you for commenting on my poetry Maddie
Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:49 AM
Hi Madelin, A lovely romantic write that summons imagery.. Ken
Barton Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Thank you ken
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:45 AM
- A sweet memory and an even more sweeter poem :))) - Have a nice Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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