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First Kiss

Butterflies, they whirled, my heart skipped a beat A cliche, maybe so, I was swept me off my feet Like a gentle breeze swaying, daydreams led the way To a field filled with daisies, upon which I lay His fingers of one hand threaded my hair The other cupped my chin, hypnotized we both stared A slight tremble through me, I knew it was right Eyelids, much too heavy, they closed off my sight So subtle, the feeling, his lips, they brushed mine Overcome, I am drunk, on loves bittersweet wine How to describe it, perpetual bliss The beautiful moments of my very first kiss!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/9/2013 12:20:00 AM
Hi Kelly, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 9/14/2012 2:24:00 AM
Wow! Nice write! Love the way you've described it. 'perpetual bliss', ha! What else can beat that!
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:15:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Kelly. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2012 8:02:00 AM
A lovely write... uncomplicated and easy to read! Very enjoyable! Enjoy your stay! Love, Jack
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