Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

First Kiss

Mesmerized by your eyes 
my heart flutters wildly
fingertips softly caress 
your handsome face
Sweet sound of our breath
quickens as you beckon 
my body to yours
chin trembles slightly 
leaving me shaky
with anticipation lips part
lashes kiss my cheeks
sweet soft lips meet mine
sending waves of euphoria
throughout my being
tongues dance tasting your
delicious warmth
igniting a hungry passion
pulling us into each other 
deeper as strong arms 
embrace holding me 
aching for you 
melting becoming one 
one breath 
one heartbeat 
one being 
First kiss........ 

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Robert Kinard December 27, 2019 at 8:13 AM Nicely done. I'd almost swear you've been watching me and wife. Doing our thing. (just kidding) I wish my kissing poem was as passionate as yours. Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:52 AM Haha Robert maybe I've been watching lol! Nah but thank you !;)

John Fleming November 25, 2019 at 2:18 AM Beautifully espoused, Brenda...you don't leave much out here -- nicely crafted! Lots of fond thoughts. :) john Brenda Chiri November 25, 2019 at 6:22 AM Ah thank you John! I always love when you visit and all your watm comments!;) hugs!;)

Paul Callus November 6, 2019 at 10:21 AM First kisses are meant to linger in our mind, especially if they are the kind which you describe so romantically in this poem, Brenda! A lovely positive experience will certainly lead on to more of the same:) Regards // paul Brenda Chiri November 6, 2019 at 9:34 PM Thank you Paul I appreciate your comment and it can be a powerful memory!;)

Caren Krutsinger November 6, 2019 at 2:08 AM "tongues dance tasting your delicious warmth igniting a hungry passion pulling us into each other " - you are two steps away from writing romance novels and making money from them. Brenda Chiri November 6, 2019 at 9:36 PM Thank you Caren I love it when you stop by and wonderful comment!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script November 5, 2019 at 3:07 PM Loving this...soo artistic!!! INK Brenda Chiri November 5, 2019 at 4:15 PM Ahh romantic is it? Lol thanks G appreciate that don't think I've called that before!;)

Carolyn Devonshire November 5, 2019 at 11:22 AM Brenda, you brought me back to my first-ever kiss. It's hard to believe I experienced such strong emotions. Beautifully penned! Hugs, Carolyn Brenda Chiri November 5, 2019 at 11:56 AM Carolyn so nice of you to stop by! Actually it's how I imagined a first kiss would be! But thank you appreciate it so much!;)

Matthew Anish November 5, 2019 at 8:25 AM I remember some first kisses and you describe them vividly in your poem. One typo - I believe you meant "softly" instead of "soltly". Peace & Love Matthew Anish Brenda Chiri November 5, 2019 at 8:36 AM Yes I did thank you! And thank you for the read!;)