First January Storm

Snow swirled silently along the streets.
People whispered about the cold,
Old couples huddled using thick sheets.
January began, temperatures fell, so bold.

Electric bulbs flickered low in window frames,
Children slept warmly afar from frosted glass,
Their parent curled tight beside the flames,
Thunder and lightning as storms amass.
Storms increased, but all treated them as games.

Rain swirled with snow in the streets.
Seattle is drowning in a flood.
Clouds shed water in torrid sheets.
Eventually, the rain stopped, leaving tons of mud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buehler Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 7:23 PM
Your captivating and vivid depiction of wild weather, was a pleasure to read, Victor. Best wishes. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 11:56 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "First January Storm" write/story. I feel the snow/cold/rain coming off your words. Spring will be here before we know it. Stay Warm.... Have a wonderful day writing away.................
Daniel Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 1:25 AM
Can feel the scene here, great penning:)
Hind Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 10:09 PM
Love the imagery of "sheets" especially
Zahid Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:22 PM
That is a great write. I hope you are enjoying the winters
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 9:12 AM
Wow so you heard about Seattle in your part of the world. My dad's last wife lives in that area and she is safe and sound. She was his fourth wife and was so sweet to my dad before he died at age 87 . We are in my least favorite month of the year right now but it's raining and hardly snowing. So I am good with that!
May Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 5:50 AM
You describe a winter storm well, Very nicely penned
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 5:46 AM
I enjoyed the imagery in your poem! Also the love and playfulness of the children and couple. Warm hugs! I’m going from semi-cold, this week, to Buffalo cold. Brrr…
Daniels Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 5:45 AM
Excellent imagery, Victor. You are a rhyming master ! I enjoyed these lines : “ Children slept warmly afar from frosted glass, Their parent curled tight beside the flames,”. I was under the impression you are in Malta. Soorry. I see it is Seattle. Keep warm, either way. May 2026 be a good one for you.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 7:27 AM
I live in Malta. Not extreme cold here.
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 5:22 AM
Very UpToDate with what is going on in that area. So sad to see what happened on TV. I can't imagine how hard that must be on the people who lived there. I hope that something can be figured out to help prevent this in the future. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Poet Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 4:32 AM
Impressive use of imagery in your poetry, Victor.. Your winter poetry was lovely to read. Enjoy your new year!
Edmonds  Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 1:47 AM
Same here Victor, snow has fallen and it’s bitterly cold. I enjoyed reading your wintry poem. Happy New year… Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 1:04 AM
Brrr can feel the chill in your verse Victor, I remember our first house when we got married ,the windows used to freeze up on the inside in winter. Happy New Year. Tom
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