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First Impression To Great Expectation

Sometimes, those difficult road
Will lead you to beautiful places
The opening view receives bad comments
For the road is rocky, unpaved and dusty
Many who travel by are not comfortable
Some hopeless and some wondered why
They travel such misery experience to repent
Left no choice but to go and move forward
The travel is truly a humpy-bumpy experience
Silence and self-censorship are the busy phrase
The way is lackadaisical turtle uphill and downhill
Feel refresh as the crisp air welcome them a mile away
Sudden break joy in the lungs and touching chill in the skin
All eyes now is exciting as the nature's nice view is unfolding
They alive their curiosity, on their cameras and now start recording
The road now quite smooth and under construction
To pave answer the town folks demands for government projects
You'll see the traveler's faces now are happy
For the place is a tourist attraction and staycation
There are natural spring, a local resort for tourists
Forest cabin for mountaineers, sky-rocket falls for nature lovers
More modest hotels and vacation houses for long-term stayers
Affordable beaches at the bay resorts for snorkels and bathers
Exuberant eaters of local and foreign delicacies are for choices
For a hungry mouth, mukbangers and food lovers alike
The place is a secluded paradise that only few discovered
What people hates first impression
God has provide great expectation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 12/5/2024 3:46:00 PM
Hello Hugo, we are travelling on our own road. We all have twist and turns to go through. The roads are not smooth they are rough we must walk them. Until we reach our end of the road. Much love here. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/8/2024 10:58:00 AM
Hello Hugo, Yes life is tough. It is tough but we must keep on travelling on our road. Yes we long to make it on the finish line. Where the jewel awaits us. Your welcome Hugo. Much love here. /Darlene/
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 12/6/2024 5:18:00 PM
Life's a road to travel on. It's like a race. Though sometimes, luck or tough, life must moved on. We always long to make it on the finishing line where the the jewels awaits. Thank you, Darlene. How nice of you. Love lots here./Hugo.

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