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First Impression To Great Expectation

Sometimes, those difficult road Will lead you to beautiful places The opening view receives bad comments For the road is rocky, unpaved and dusty Many who travel by are not comfortable Some hopeless and some wondered why They travel such misery experience to repent Left no choice but to go and move forward The travel is truly a humpy-bumpy experience Silence and self-censorship are the busy phrase The way is lackadaisical turtle uphill and downhill Feel refresh as the crisp air welcome them a mile away Sudden break joy in the lungs and touching chill in the skin All eyes now is exciting as the nature's nice view is unfolding They alive their curiosity, on their cameras and now start recording The road now quite smooth and under construction To pave answer the town folks demands for government projects You'll see the traveler's faces now are happy For the place is a tourist attraction and staycation There are natural spring, a local resort for tourists Forest cabin for mountaineers, sky-rocket falls for nature lovers More modest hotels and vacation houses for long-term stayers Affordable beaches at the bay resorts for snorkels and bathers Exuberant eaters of local and foreign delicacies are for choices For a hungry mouth, mukbangers and food lovers alike The place is a secluded paradise that only few discovered What people hates first impression God has provide great expectation.

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Date: 12/5/2024 3:46:00 PM
Hello Hugo, we are travelling on our own road. We all have twist and turns to go through. The roads are not smooth they are rough we must walk them. Until we reach our end of the road. Much love here. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/8/2024 10:58:00 AM
Hello Hugo, Yes life is tough. It is tough but we must keep on travelling on our road. Yes we long to make it on the finish line. Where the jewel awaits us. Your welcome Hugo. Much love here. /Darlene/
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 12/6/2024 5:18:00 PM
Life's a road to travel on. It's like a race. Though sometimes, luck or tough, life must moved on. We always long to make it on the finishing line where the the jewels awaits. Thank you, Darlene. How nice of you. Love lots here./Hugo.

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