First Impression - Impress Me Contest
Oh Giorgio how can i imress you
What words can i say
Shall I write about a blue sky
On a summers day.
Maybe a mighty boat
That sailed away to heavens gates
Taking with it our loved ones
To a painfree home, to watch and wait
Think i will write about the heartache
Brought on by those in power
Sending our lads to fight
A battle no one wants to endure
How about I write of love
You seek and you will find
Where you want to hold and touch
Lustily seductive, mind twisting kind
Hope i have impressed you
With these few words of mine
Even more so I think
Cos i penned it all in rhyme
Penned 27 July 2013
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