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First Hint of Love

The heightened sparks of joyful days That cheer us up in many ways, When music raps, as voices drawl Before the morning winds enthrall... For his chime is a faithful song That lifts me up where I belong, Before star's luster mark a name To our talks, our gazes, aflame. Somehow the hints of love unfold Refreshing every breath I hold; So let this nightfall find it’s grace To charm my thoughts with fond embrace... Until a soft surrendering I raise my cheeks and start to fling, That from this moment’s rhapsody Life speaks of a day meant for me. In The Mood For Love For Shadow Hamilton 11/26/2015

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Date: 12/4/2015 4:45:00 AM
I love the flow and rhyme, it reads so well and enjoyably, not to mention that it is darn romantic and a mood setter - could be a love song. Congrats on your win ... CayCay
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:01:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your lovely poetic mood win. LUV SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2015 11:12:00 AM
A free spirit, embracing love, wrote this beauty, Nette! Bravo again! jimbo
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Date: 11/27/2015 3:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, A truly beautiful piece of poetry!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/26/2015 9:52:00 PM
Wonderful pen nette.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 11/26/2015 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, an absolute delight to read, with a mystical flowing cadence that welcomes the experience, and ends with a smile. Emile.
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Date: 11/26/2015 3:06:00 PM
I was going to comment on how dreamy this is , then to find out it already won! Congratulations all the way!
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Date: 11/26/2015 2:59:00 PM
- So beautiful, Nette - (posted today ...... and already won .... congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2015 2:41:00 PM
perfect flow Nette congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 11/26/2015 2:15:00 PM
Held captive by the "soft surrendering" of your romantic, extraordinary poem!
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Date: 11/26/2015 12:58:00 PM
Ravishing! I am in love with your poetry!
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Date: 11/26/2015 8:11:00 AM
Do like your take on the theme Nette - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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