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unrhymed tercets ten lines count to the magic number 

Bite going into the ocean’s current 
savouring colours black & white 
scenting the salted breeze misting sparkle

Where the moon whispers with a delicate smile 
enchanting darkness with the glitter of starlight burning
where butter cups melt beneath petals of a thousand blooms

Before the eyes kneel where wolf whistling stars twinkle
loving all within a jewel sparkling diamond melting
held under there remains one mystery captured inside beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/28/2017 3:31:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2017 4:52:00 PM
Your pen was sparkling diamond when you wrote this poem..the butter cups melting..such a great metaphor....thank you for posting....:-)
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Date: 11/27/2017 3:28:00 PM
Lovely work Liam...
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:52:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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