First Glance

In the dawn, when the setting sun scattered it's colors
The moon sprinkled him with glitters:
And for the first time she saw him in the gleaming moonlight...

In his eyes she lost herself,
Her heart skipped a beat,
And she hushed herself,
She fall head over heels in love with him...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 5:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Barden Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:51 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Manu - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
Ranjini Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:19 AM
Thank you for your valuable comment, it means a lot to me, Gregory
Murray Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 4:58 PM
How beautiful is love at first glance Manu. Congratulations on your placement.
Ranjini Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Thankyou Jean :)
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Congratulations on your win, Manu! Hugs Eve ~`*
Ranjini Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thank you Eve.
Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Beautiful, Manu. Congrats on your placement.
Ranjini Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thank you Line.
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