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First Fall Snow

FIRST FALL SNOW Frigid winds Indent the once silken Radiance of a bygone, Sun struck summer Terrain . It’s Fall, and All that Lingers is Lightly coated with Snow, a Now troubling harbinger Of surely approaching Winter

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2012 4:00:00 PM

Daver, love the acrostic,,, chilly,,, i need a blanket all of a sudden, enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2012 3:05:00 PM

awesome write, Daver

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/4/2012 2:50:00 PM

You have presented a thoughtful and sensory rich Piece here Daver.."

Susan Burd

Date: 10/30/2012 2:03:00 PM

Aaaahhh, and mom has hot cocoa waiting inside;) thanks for the beautiful scene and a childhood memory!

Gail Debole

Date: 10/30/2012 12:59:00 PM

Hi Daver - Little bit of snow on a sunny day - beautiful. Lot of snow on a windy day - trouble. What a double-edged sword. I already miss summer, too. Thanks for your comment about my poem. - Gail

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 10/30/2012 12:29:00 PM

I love winter, when I'm all snuggled up by a beautiful open fire, so winter can be magical, depends how you look at it, love elizabeth