Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

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First Embrace

An amber candle twinkles in the wind
Its golden fluoresce waltzing in the breeze
Poetic silver leaves on a night bind
An amber candle twinkles in the wind
Discovered a flame of sensual mind
Where two lips first gather for a kiss squeeze
An amber candle twinkles in the wind
It's golden fluoresce waltzing in the breeze.

Written May 03, 2023

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Kelly Deschler May 7, 2023 at 10:18 AM A beautiful, romantic write... So lovely and tender...

Bill Baker May 3, 2023 at 9:53 PM So romantic, and another excellent Triolet, my friend. The imagery was exquisite! Bill

Vijay Pandit May 3, 2023 at 5:38 AM You created a candle-lit scene for a romantic kiss. Happy vibes you convey my friend.