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An amber candle twinkles in the wind Its golden fluoresce waltzing in the breeze Poetic silver leaves on a night bind An amber candle twinkles in the wind Discovered a flame of sensual mind Where two lips first gather for a kiss squeeze An amber candle twinkles in the wind It's golden fluoresce waltzing in the breeze.
Written May 03, 2023

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Date: 5/7/2023 10:18:00 AM
A beautiful, romantic write... So lovely and tender...
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:53:00 PM
So romantic, and another excellent Triolet, my friend. The imagery was exquisite! Bill
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Date: 5/3/2023 5:38:00 AM
You created a candle-lit scene for a romantic kiss. Happy vibes you convey my friend.
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