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First Day of Spring


First Day Of Spring


March twentieth, the first day of our spring,
   though fickle she may be, buds start to stir.
The soothing breezes and sun's warming fling
   bring magic as rebirthing will confer

to push the reign of winter out of sight;
   repaint the scenery with tints of green,
and set the stage for shows of spring's delight
   as her soft haze of new growth can be seen.

Heard are the chirps of birds with hopeful songs
   of romance as they relish spring's new glow.
All creatures stir from winter sleep in throngs,
   and brooks are bubbling full, from melted snow.

On this first day of spring...what joy we feel...
   with reborn earth, new life, new hope, new zeal!


Sandra M. Haight

~4th Place~
Premiere Contest: Spring Is In The Air
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Judged: 03/05/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 1:15 PM
As always, your poem reflects the attention with which it has been written, Sandra. I like the imagery and the feeling of a new fresh start. ~ Congratulations on a much deserved win. Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Thank you very much, Paul, for your uplifting comments and congrats. I appreciate them so much. Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:48 AM
such a sweet uplifting poem Sandra, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 7:07 PM
Thank you very much, Jan! It can't come soon enough! Hugs, Sandra
Messina Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 8:43 PM
Wonderful poem Sandra, as always. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest...Charlie
Haight Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 9:04 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie, for your visit, congrats and uplifting comment! Sandra :)
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February 19, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Sandra, I love all the images in your delightful spring sonnet. Perfect meter and form as well and it was a strong contender for first place. There were some wonderful entries in this category. Congratulations on your second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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February 19, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Oh, thank you, Carolyn! I am grateful for your nice comments and placement. It must have been very difficult to judge, but I think the four 1st place winners were excellent choices in their categories with very creative approaches! It was a fun contest, and thank you again for you all you do to create such interesting contests. Hugs, Sandra
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March 7, 2018 at 4:08 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this beautiful, exuberant poem, Sandra! Janice
Haight Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Congrats on your win. Well done, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Indeed.....fickle is the word to use! We have had spring....then winter, then spring again ......it is like a woman, who cannot make up her mind! I loved your poem, Sandra! Congratulations to you !!
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March 6, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Yes, indeed, Carrie. We are expecting another nor'easter tomorrow with perhaps 12" plus of snow here in the Hudson Valley, NY (about 60 miles North of NYC). We had 70 degree temps a little over a week ago! Thank you for the lovely comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
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March 5, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations Sandra :)
Haight Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Thank you very much, Heide! Hugs, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations, your poem earned a place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Thanks for the great contest, Emile. It was a pleasure to participate and appreciate my nice placement! Sandra
Brewer Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Delightful descriptive sonnet, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you very much, Geoffrey! Much appreciated. Sandra
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March 2, 2018 at 1:29 AM
Very vibrant Sonnet, Sandra. I like the line " Our reborn earth, new life, new hope, new zeal" very much.
Haight Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:05 PM
beautiful sonnet sweet Sandra! Good luck :)luloo
Haight Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Thank you very much, Laura, for your lovely comment. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Lovely pictures in words so wonderful. Best wishes for the contest because it is my least favorite season so I can't come up with a kind word.
Haight Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Thank you very much, Janet, for your visit and very uplifting and supportive comments. You must have good reasons to not like Spring... Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Wonderful and uplifting poem, Sandra. Well done.
Haight Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Line, I am pleased that you like it. Hugs, Sandra
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