Get Your Premium Membership

First Day of School

Teary mom waves ciao.
Through the school's louvre, he shouts,
"I want to go home!"
16/04/21 Ansar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/14/2025 8:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/7/2021 5:37:00 PM
Too cute. My first day of school I went so excited to meet other kids. I did see one little girl though who was terrified and clung desperately to her mother's skirt crying for her not to leave her there alone. Good write my friend. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2021 8:26:00 PM
Ha, ha! Some things never change down through the generations. Well-captured, Ansar! Peace, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2021 5:35:00 PM
I like this!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2021 11:52:00 AM
Excellent and clear as a school bell. Humbly, Pangie
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry