First Day of School

Teary mom waves ciao.
Through the school's louvre, he shouts,
"I want to go home!"
16/04/21 Ansar
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Agustin Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 8:29 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Ball Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 5:37 PM
Too cute. My first day of school I went so excited to meet other kids. I did see one little girl though who was terrified and clung desperately to her mother's skirt crying for her not to leave her there alone. Good write my friend. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 8:26 PM
Ha, ha! Some things never change down through the generations. Well-captured, Ansar! Peace, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 5:35 PM
I like this!
Romios Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Excellent and clear as a school bell. Humbly, Pangie
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