First Date - A

Our fingertips brush; a frisson passes 'tween us 'fore lips interlock.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Sweet ..thanks
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:40 PM
Very sweet!!! What will be B?
Michaels Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 3:39 AM
Maybe one day I'll reveal!! Thanks for stopping by!
A   Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:43 PM
hehehe... I'm back here, do to the extra replies...LOL, Thank you John,....Linda
Michaels Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 3:39 AM
Right back at you, Linda!
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Anytime John, thanks for the reply... I still remember my first date ..Linda
Michaels Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Indeed... the anxiety, the butterflies in the stomach and the excitement all wrapped up together!
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:44 AM
John, , awesome haiku... Enjoyed the imagery..... Linda
Michaels Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Thanks, Linda. Glad you enjoyed it! This is one of those rare Haiku which jumped into my brain almost fully-formed (*almost*). Thanks for stopping by.
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Nice images for the first date, john
Michaels Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 2:29 PM
Thanks for great comments on so many of my poems. Really appreciate them!
Christian Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 6:34 AM
Aww first dates are always sweet. Thanks for your feed back on my poems. I am fine I júst carnt get in a relationship with some one who is alchohol dependant. Friends yes partners no. It dont work as the drink takes priority. Look forward to reading more of your work
Michaels Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:34 AM
Thanks, Diane. Glad you're doing okay...
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