First Date

FIRST   DATE

Her name was Judy McCormick, she was fourteen - barely
I was also fourteen, but claimed to be fifteen
She was slim,  pretty with  shortish dark brown hair,
Almond eyes, loveliest I'd  ever seen
And a soft sweet smile, I just knew she would be nice

Noticed  her in the movies, one glance followed another
Found ourselves laughing at the same things we’d see
After  the theatre  walked her home  with her little brother
Would she come again next week   with me ?
She said yes.  I felt ten feet tall

We met at the theatre as arranged, it had rained
We went dutch. I bought her ice cream after a while.
We watched Steve Reeves  in  HERCULES UNCHAINED
Cant recall the plot, only her eyes and smile
Kissed her secretly in the dark  -  salty, gently.

In those days  sex hadn’t been invented.
We walked home hand in hand and kissed again at her door
Yeah, corny, improbable, but true  - virginity undented
How did  the first date end? We both were delighted and more
With ourselves and decided to arrange another date. 

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Written  for  Carol  Brown’s   Contest    “My First Date”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 8:11 AM
I remember this one from reading it before. Congratulations and I forgot to ask you, did you become her boyfriend?
Beck Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 1:34 PM
aw shucks we went out together several times and then it fizzled...l o l
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 3:45 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Sydney
Brown Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Syd. Love, Carol
Lindenmuth Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:26 PM
thanks for allowing a third party along on your date, nice write, from a much simpler time
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 12:25 AM
Hey you were fourteen too and like with me, thankfully (I say) sex had not been invented. I wish they could make young love like this again. I see today's pre teens with their cell phones and sexting and the stupid little bands they wear on their arms to denote how "far" they go with guys. All the innocence and beauty of first love has gone out of the world of the modern teen. I hope there are still some out there that have virtue.
Roberts Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 9:46 PM
too sweet, just love it, especially the sex hadn't been invented yet line........good luck in the contest
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