First Date

go to dine
start with a little wine
present her your own natural self

Compliments are a sure way to keep off the shelf
never speak of money or your personal wealth
stay focused and see ways to relate

order food sure to sate
good first date
		~//~
a stitch made in time
in the course of do and don’ts
is said to save nine
you are more well off to plan 
than caught dead in the water
		~//~
Better to always have thoughts benign.
Better to always meet at least as friends.
There is no awkward making of amends.
Quickly conjuring excuses for evil design

It’s good not to imbibe in verbal decline.
The reasons just don’t justify the ends.
Better to always have thoughts benign
Better to always meet at least as friends.

I’m embarrassed to have my words malign.
So I try to say nothing which might offend.
That’s a good thing, I don’t have to pretend,
when I’m falsely accused of verbal brine.
Better to always have thoughts benign.

© Oct 20 2010   Charles Henderson 3 rd
    in Jared's Trois, Tanka, Rondel contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Charles
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Jared Pickett's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Charles ..congrats ..well deserved win contest. Gud usage of all three forms Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra Mehta
Freeman Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations Charles, on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:30 AM
Congrats Charles on your big win in Jared's contest with this amazing and awesome entry for the contest.. superb piece my friend ..enjoy this wonderful Sunday with lots of luv..
Richards Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:27 AM
This was a delight to read, Charles!! Congratulations on your win!! :)
Devonshire Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:11 AM
So happy to see you in the winners' circle, Charles! Well done, my friend. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Hickman Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:56 PM
a very intelegent and wisely written piece that shows your dating knowledge and wisdom in life,,all the best in all the contests that you enter,,and i truly want to Thank You for your visits to my words and for you leaving yours on mine,,,,Blessings..cecil
Mannan Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 8:49 PM
That is an awesome poem. Loved the line,'Better to always meet.....friends'. Thanks for your kind comments.
Gelb Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 4:11 PM
I liked your poem. Thanks for the comment to mine.
Devonshire Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Charles, very clever the way you literally "stitched" these three forms together. Some good advice in here -- I especially like your first date advice! I'll have to remember that if the occasion ever arises again. Showing a positive attitude as described in the Rondel is always a good approach as well. Wise words from a wise friend. Best wishes in Jared's contest, Charles. Love, Carolyn
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