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First Dandelion

Forth from its safe nook sun on grass ~ spring's dandelion shows its green face. dandelion wrecked drifts at the kitchen window ~ pleasant southern wind Dandy Dandelion gets up and trims his yellow hair, the ant drinks his dewdrop and rises his bed to air. I halted my shuffling steps in the trees to gaze, glanced where the sunlight was in a saffron blaze.
3rd Place Contest Winner A Monoku, Haiku And 4 Lines Of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
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George Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Simply lovely! I love the image of Dandelion' trimming his yellow hair' ! Congratulations dear Lasaad on your win.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:22 AM
- Congratulations Las ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Lasaad, wonderfully penned, enjoyed the imagery in this, congratulations on your winning placement!
Narain Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Dandelions are the pesky weeds. It multiplies by blowing ots seed in air. Nicely penned.
Hind Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Simply beautiful. I loved all the imagery.
Sands Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 7:09 AM
I enjoyed this Dandelion poem. I can see the bright yellow. Cheery :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Hello Sotto, The dandelions are a bright yellow. It brightens a lawn on a dull day. Some of the dandelions is used for wine. Some for salad. Enjoy yur day my friend. /Darlene\
Pandit Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 10:12 AM
I see the dandelion rising in spring through your words. Lovely description my friend: glanced where the sunlight was in a saffron blaze...
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