First Dandelion

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Forth from its safe nook sun on grass ~ spring's dandelion shows its green face. dandelion wrecked drifts at the kitchen window ~ pleasant southern wind Dandy Dandelion gets up and trims his yellow hair, the ant drinks his dewdrop and rises his bed to air. I halted my shuffling steps in the trees to gaze, glanced where the sunlight was in a saffron blaze. 3rd Place Contest Winner A Monoku, Haiku And 4 Lines Of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Valsa George

Date: 6/13/2023 9:44:00 AM

Simply lovely! I love the image of Dandelion' trimming his yellow hair' ! Congratulations dear Lasaad on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 2:22:00 AM

- Congratulations Las ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/12/2023 3:41:00 PM

Lasaad, wonderfully penned, enjoyed the imagery in this, congratulations on your winning placement!

Jay Narain

Date: 6/5/2023 2:58:00 PM

Dandelions are the pesky weeds. It multiplies by blowing ots seed in air. Nicely penned.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/4/2023 3:53:00 PM

Simply beautiful. I loved all the imagery.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/4/2023 7:09:00 AM

I enjoyed this Dandelion poem. I can see the bright yellow. Cheery :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/3/2023 11:02:00 AM

Hello Sotto, The dandelions are a bright yellow. It brightens a lawn on a dull day. Some of the dandelions is used for wine. Some for salad. Enjoy yur day my friend. /Darlene\

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/3/2023 10:12:00 AM

I see the dandelion rising in spring through your words. Lovely description my friend: glanced where the sunlight was in a saffron blaze...