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First Crush: You Crushed My feelings forever

For the boy who had gone through his first crush..  wrote by Mrs.Madhavi.Suyog.Pagare

 First Crush: Crushed My feelings forever!!

Her epitome of innocence and virtue made me sick.
Friend around me suddenly pricked.
Scene from the titanic in my mind clicked.
I lost somewhere else and she squandered the opportunity.
Crazy girl, You clinged my heart!!

She was suffice so as I.
Looking at her radiant smile, I was blessed.
My feelings blushed on my cheeks.
God had postulated the first law of love.
Was it the infatuation?? Was it the love??
Crazy girl, Your face is glued on my heart!!

Blue whales diving down deep into the sea.
Molluscan shell in her arms, holding the glittering pearl.
Sun and moon playing the game of hide and seek.
God showered the ecstatic divineness.
Love arised from both the ends .
Her expression occupied the quadrangle of my soul.
Crazy girl, Your adorable persona sticked on my mind!!

My friends tagged her as my Queen.
But it was just a mystery.
I waited till last..
But She didn't rebelled the three precious words.
Desperately waited for the moment.
But When i saw her with his boyfriend.
Crazy girl, You killed my heart!!

Getting goosebumps,
Just left tears in my eyes.
Each and every memories of mine are fragmentized.
Just left with the ashes of moments that we shared together.
Life just can't stop without being you.
But you are the luckiest one to be remembered for life time.
Crazy girl,My crush,You crushed my soul!!  with Suyog Pagare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/13/2013 4:03:00 AM
A very nice write truly beatiful ~V~
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Madhavi Sarjare pagare
Date: 4/9/2014 12:18:00 PM
Thanks VP.. ## MADS##
Date: 10/9/2013 10:26:00 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Madhavi
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Madhavi Sarjare pagare
Date: 10/10/2013 10:30:00 AM
Thanks Dr.Ram, thanks a lot.. ~madhavi
Date: 10/8/2013 7:43:00 PM
Madhavi, CONGRATS! sweet win................... SKAT
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Madhavi Sarjare pagare
Date: 10/9/2013 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Skat..hugs..@@madhavi
Date: 10/8/2013 7:36:00 AM
- A nice and thoughtful poem to the B-day girl Linda!! - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, MADHAVI! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Madhavi Sarjare pagare
Date: 10/9/2013 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Anne.. @@madhavi
Date: 10/7/2013 9:32:00 PM
Hi Madhavi, , not my theme for the contest... but it was a xool thought and great poem.. congratulations...<3 Linda <3
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Madhavi Sarjare pagare
Date: 10/9/2013 10:23:00 AM
Thanks P.D., catch you in some other contest.. @mads..
Date: 8/28/2013 4:05:00 AM
Hi Madhavi, This situation happens too many times, were someone gets hurt because of a crush or infatuation, but boys and girls do move on and are a lot more careful the next time a crush comes by their way. The story was very interesting and you spent a fair bit of time in writing this piece, so I say to you keep writing as over time your work will reach it's peak of excellence. this is very good though. John
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Madhavi Sarjare pagare
Date: 8/29/2013 1:28:00 AM
Hi John, Firstly thanks for your comment buddy. Its my pleasure for appreciating and understanding my poem.Also I am thankful for the quality time you spend on it and will surely keep writing and your comments are most welcome. Madhavi