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First Conversation

Today, I am finally prepared not to miss that call
Sweeping rose petals off the deck, carried in my pocket, house phone
Anticipating the sound of the voice- first conversation!

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2010

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Lynette Chachere Date: 6/10/2010 1:29:00 PM sounds like a waiting for love(: & congrats to you, as you deserved with this sweet sijo. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 6/9/2010 9:13:00 AM Congrats on your win in the contest with this interesting write! Dan C Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/9/2010 7:00:00 AM Congratulations Audrey on your win in the "Sijo" contest by Rick Parise. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/8/2010 7:47:00 PM Congrats BBF on your HM in the Sijo contest with this awesome write ..knew it earlier when read.. enjoy your special honor .. eye surg went very well ..am allowed one hour on comp tonight.. more tomorrow.. your BBF "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 6/8/2010 7:45:00 PM This leaves us hanging and that is the beauty of a good sijo. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/7/2010 3:04:00 PM What a beauty Audrey BBF and good luck in Rick's contest... a creative idea too.. lovely words from a lovely lady .. your BBF .. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/7/2010 10:20:00 AM I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading your poetry today Audrey. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/7/2010 5:02:00 AM A nice Sijo well expressed Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/6/2010 9:54:00 PM That first voice we hear can set the tone for the rest of our day. And if you live alone, you don't want to miss calls. I carry my phone outside with me too, Audrey. Such a sweet reflection to end my evening. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply