First Breath

Night and day,
	oceans and mountains,
			fishes and birds,
				forests and fountains,
tender shoots, first buds,
	gentle warmth, yellow light,
		bright waters tumbling down,
			sounds of singing all around:

First breath, first days;

Isn’t it good?
Very good.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Messina Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Lovely how you've expressed "First breath" Jeanette. Isn't it good? Very Good! Thanks for your recent visits...Charlie
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January 6, 2024 at 3:11 AM
Happy poetry time with creation :)
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