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First Begotten

~The awesome Jesus, the Christ The chosen from birth for sacrifice The Agape Love with no vice Bringer of peace will suffice First begotten Son of the highest

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/22/2011 12:41:00 PM

this is a very special one Moses:) enjoyed this write very much! Thanks so much for your congrats on Kwe' placement in Constance's contest, always appreciated...Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2011 12:20:00 AM

john, the only thing I can think of that kept this from a top ten was not having super exact rhyme. Otherwise, it is superb. And it's meaning is the BEST.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 3/17/2011 11:54:00 PM

I must say here that I knew you wrote this when I read it yesterday, I appreciate it's beauty. Thanks for supporting my contest dearest John. I am sorry it took me this long to congratulate you. Please accept my warm congrats and please keep your passionate painting poetry pages with creative colors. I wish you all the best with your writings dearest. You are a great friend indeed, I can't thank you enough dear friend for always standing by my side. Love always, Adeleke

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/17/2011 3:45:00 PM

Congratuations on this win in the contest, John

Kash Poet

Date: 3/17/2011 11:17:00 AM

Wonderful write john!Congrats on your win!---kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2011 7:15:00 AM

John, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/17/2011 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations Moses on your win in the "Golden Gratitude" contest sponsored by Adeleke Adeite. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/17/2011 5:45:00 AM

Congrats Moses on your HM in Golden Gratitude contest my friend.. wonderful words so inspirationally beautiful luv.. enjoy your special honor...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/17/2011 4:03:00 AM

Delightful john. many warmest congrtas for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2011 7:13:00 AM

~~~Magnificent~~~I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Moses. Have a wonderful week filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/14/2011 3:26:00 PM

Amen! As sweet as his blessed name, holy and eternal love came in flesh and laid down his life, in spite of his afore knowledge that he would suffer the most painful death! He willingly- The true Lamb of God..died in man's place and still we do not know how FREE indeed we are!! Thank you so much for sharing this during the holy season of Lent, John. Love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2011 12:45:00 PM

John, Wayalee's contest is still open. I just looked and I think it's about third from the top on the list of member contests. She has also allowed for 70 entries now since she wants both people to enter their co-writes. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2011 12:14:00 PM

This comes from deep within your spiritual heart, John. I love it and hope you've entered it in Adeleke's contest. Who deserves our appreciation more than Jesus? Love, Carolyn