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First Baby Steps

Babbling endlessly, holding furniture, he walks When furniture ends he looks at me Leaves his hands, rushes towards me Falling on my thighs, clasps them tightly Joyous exhilaration fills me I lift him and hug him lovingly 08.09.2021 Note : This bite size poem captures the first time my son walked on his own without holding anything. For Bite size poem 20, Line Gauthier

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Date: 9/23/2021 2:50:00 AM
Very nice Rama! It should have been placed higher! well done.
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Date: 9/16/2021 9:23:00 AM
You have captured this moment of joy perfectly Rama! All of us who have experienced this moment of wonder, and new freedom, can relate to both your joy and your son's feeling of accomplishment! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/16/2021 4:10:00 AM
Yeah, exhilarating experience indeed, congratulations, Rama:)
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Date: 9/15/2021 9:22:00 PM
Coming back to congratulate you.
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Date: 9/11/2021 9:34:00 AM
So lovely Rama, moments a mother or father never forgets… Belle
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:16:00 AM
Happy memories Rama, you never forget those first steps. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:00:00 AM
Picturesque. Detailed. You have minutely observed the child's trial and error of walking.
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