First and Last

The first breathe is said to be taken,
the moment you are born.
Five months ago I lived that moment again,
and was lucky enough to be reborn.

My first true breathe was taken,
from the first moment I met you.
It was then I realized I had not been living,
and my first breathe was long overdue.

I began living from the moment I saw you,
and I die slowly whenever your depressed. 
But no matter what my soul is feeling,
my heart will forever beat within your chest.

Their is no other who can possible take your place,
your spot in my life is forever set in stone.
As long as we have each other,
We will never again be left out and alone.

Every morning that I wake up to a thought of you,
my body fills with intense emotion.
Their has never been someone I loved so much,
who I cared for with such devotion.

I will love you until the day comes,
when we have to part while I take my final breath.
But when that day draws closer I want you to know,
I will continue to love you even in death.

If theres one joy, one love,
from which I never want to part.
Its you my very special love,
my world my life, my heart.

My first and last breath,
the first and last beat of my heart.
Will all take place when I am with you,
Nothing will ever tear us apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/16/2016 11:53:00 PM
Aydin, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 2:38:00 PM
AYDIN, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:35:00 PM
very nice, very smooth!
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