Firing Squad

i feel the darkness surround me, 
i know what fate lies ahead,
i sense the fear take over me,
i know i will soon be dead,

i hear the ground beneath me,
i know i must face my end,
i sense the guns select me,
their bullets my only friend,

the darkness is drawn from me,
and the light forced in my face,
i see the rifles before me,
my body now frozen in space,

i see my life spread out before me,
i see my oncoming end,
i hear the triggers pulled for me,
a bullet, the message they send,

i felt the darkness surround me,
their sights locked to my head,
i no longer have fear inside me,
my body now lies dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ekpemandu Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:27 AM
it was nice stopping by to read you poem today.....keep the good work up..and welcome to poetry soup
Lopez Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:41 PM
Amazing work! This piece just bleeds emotion and a deeper meaning. It actually brings to mind a soldier at war, being captured. Excellent work, I can't wait to read more!
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