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Fireworks Darkest night glittered bright with lights, Sweets, gifts, embrace, put off all fights, Fireworks play ! Blazing passion fumed high in chest, Invisible till reached crest, Firewood ash ! Emotions shackled in customs, Struggle to break free is phantom, Firearm shots ! Written November 22nd, 2014 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma For the Compound verse contest by Nette onclaud Chosen topic : fire

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Date: 11/25/2014 8:36:00 AM
A Lovely poem. I'm refreshed reading through your lines.Thanks for the share. Definitely a 7
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Date: 11/23/2014 12:22:00 AM
Wonderfully penned Dr. Upma! I can almost see them in the skies in all their brighteness and noise. A 7 for me! GL in the contest! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/22/2014 11:32:00 PM
Great imagery here! Beautiful poem Dr. Upma A. Sharma
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Date: 11/22/2014 7:15:00 PM
a very interesting way to do the fire theme, Dr. Upma. I see you put the compound word in the front of each of its lines. thinking outside the box!
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:32:00 PM
You are on fire with this contest Dr Sharma- good luck! Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:41:00 AM
You did very well with this contest idea. I think its a winner my friend!!
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Date: 11/22/2014 7:44:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I need to check this one out..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2014 6:27:00 AM
Intriguing write, Dr Upma. I need to check this contest out! "Emotions shackled in customs" How well I know this. I've missed you, Yaar. Hugs
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