Fireworks

Out past the meadow on the hill up high 
Two young lovers on the fourth of July 

Blanket spread out on top of the ground 
Watching the town folk gather around 

Kids run around with sparklers ablaze 
The high school marching band plays. 

The smell of cotton candy fills the air. 
The excitement is growing at the county fair. 

Out of the way up high on that hill 
Was two young lovers one named Jack, one Jill 

The crowd is buzzing as the sun goes low 
Waiting for the mighty fireworks show 

Jack looks at Jill with love in his eyes 
In anticipation of the show in the skies 

Jill puts her head upon Jack's soft lap 
Gazing and wanting the night to unwrap 

The first firework streams into the air, 
As a glittering tail follows it there. 

A crackle and a boom it erupts in the sky 
Watching with awe as the following fireworks fly. 

Jack says to Jill, Oh how I love you so 
You give me fireworks dontcha know 

Jill smiles sweetly and gives him a kiss
This firework show she doesn't want to miss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 10:26 PM
You two sure know how it's done! Great poem...One is left to ponder the greater firework display that is to come. Nothing like those kinds of fireworks! ;)
Smith Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 8:15 PM
One great show after another...hugs Tim
Vaso Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 8:18 PM
Great poem, and Happy July 4th!!!!!!!
Smith Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Thank You my friend...cheers :)
Allison Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Wow you sure lit the sky with this one - hope he has a pocket rocket and it doesnt turn into a damp squib LOl. Hugs as ever Jan xx Come join in mine and Rose's farty party LOL
Duet Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thanks Jan...I will go check it out Hugs Tim
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