Barbara Barry-Nishanian Poet Pantoum

Fireworks

FIREWORKKS

    We desire firework excitement, from noise to smoky smell,
   watch them exploding into thousands, of glittering brilliant hues.
  Hear crackling, popping, booming, and yes, hearing ourselves yell,
  watch some spin in sparkling showers, of reds, purples, and blues.
  
   Watch them exploding into thousands, of glittering brilliant hues,
   observe some of them whistling, then exploding in the air.
 Watch some spin in sparkling showers, of reds, purples, and blues,    
some tumble like a waterfall sparkles falling everywhere.

   Observe some of them whistling, then exploding in the air,
   hear crackling, popping, booming, and yes, hearing ourselves yell.
Some tumble like a waterfall sparkles falling everywhere,
   we desire firework excitement, from noise to smoky smell.

   Jan.2, 2021 copyright 
Contest: Pantoum-Fireworks
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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James Edward Lee Sr. January 15, 2021 at 11:59 AM I just love this, verse so practical and colorful metaphorically splendid.... Also a fave for me Wish you well James Barbara Barry-Nishanian January 17, 2021 at 2:05 PM WOW, James! Metaphorically splendid.??? I'm so new at writing I didn't even know I did this. Thank you so much, you are teaching me, as you compliment my efforts.