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FIREWORKKS We desire firework excitement, from noise to smoky smell, watch them exploding into thousands, of glittering brilliant hues. Hear crackling, popping, booming, and yes, hearing ourselves yell, watch some spin in sparkling showers, of reds, purples, and blues. Watch them exploding into thousands, of glittering brilliant hues, observe some of them whistling, then exploding in the air. Watch some spin in sparkling showers, of reds, purples, and blues, some tumble like a waterfall sparkles falling everywhere. Observe some of them whistling, then exploding in the air, hear crackling, popping, booming, and yes, hearing ourselves yell. Some tumble like a waterfall sparkles falling everywhere, we desire firework excitement, from noise to smoky smell. Jan.2, 2021 copyright Contest: Pantoum-Fireworks Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 1/29/2021 11:40:00 AM
Ah, I always look forward to them every first of July dear friend. You have described it so well, winning wishes for the contest, Blessings from me to you
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Date: 1/19/2021 6:59:00 PM
Great sound effects in words Barbara. You put me right there in the fireworks show. Nicely written. Blessings your way...
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 1/26/2021 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for expressing your comment in the way you did, "sound effects in words". I am going to visit you. Look forward to getting to know you. Thanks again for visitiing.
Date: 1/15/2021 11:58:00 PM
Very nicely done. Really good imagery. We all love to see fireworks but it scares our pets. Don't take them to the exhibition. Good stuff here. God Bless, JB
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 1/17/2021 2:02:00 PM
Wow, how did I miss your visit? Thank you Judy for visiting and enjoying my imagery. Thanks for the nice comment. Please stay safe.
Date: 1/14/2021 11:49:00 AM
Originality exploded in your poetic picture!
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 1/14/2021 2:15:00 PM
Chuck thank you for the encouragement. It is just my second pantoum poem. But let me tell you how very very much I enjoyed "Three Quarter Sad" Oh my so fantastic, that is true poetry to me! You've set the standard high my friend.

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