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Fireworks

Deafening loud noise fills the air Bursting crackers middle of night Smoke and pollution fills the air Outside it is horrendous sight Bursting crackers middle of night Educated men doing it It is definitely not right Government should not permit it Educated men doing it Smoke and pollution fills the air Government should not permit it Deafening loud noise fills the air 8 syllable count per line checked at poetry soup syllable counter

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/4/2021 8:57:00 AM

Hello, Rama, well written verse. You forgot to put a date on your poem. Your rhyme and syllable count was fine. I always expect a ten syllable count, but this time I ask for all the lines to have the same count. Hugs Eve

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/4/2021 9:22:00 AM

Thanks for the prompt response. God bless. Atleast I didn't err in the form. Thanks to you now I know how to write a pantoum. Thanks once again. Will take care in future. Looking forward to more learning opportunities through your wonderful contests. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care. Hugs Rama