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Fireworks

Deafening loud noise fills the air
Bursting crackers middle of night 
Smoke and pollution  fills the air
Outside it is horrendous sight

Bursting crackers middle of night 
Educated men doing it
It is definitely not right
Government should not permit it

Educated men doing it
Smoke and pollution fills the air
Government should not permit it
Deafening loud noise fills the air


8 syllable count per line checked at poetry soup syllable counter

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/4/2021 8:57:00 AM

Hello, Rama, well written verse. You forgot to put a date on your poem. Your rhyme and syllable count was fine. I always expect a ten syllable count, but this time I ask for all the lines to have the same count. Hugs Eve

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/4/2021 9:22:00 AM

Thanks for the prompt response. God bless. Atleast I didn't err in the form. Thanks to you now I know how to write a pantoum. Thanks once again. Will take care in future. Looking forward to more learning opportunities through your wonderful contests. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care. Hugs Rama