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Crisp biting touches the starry night provides; I sit inside my warm home listening To darken spirits shoo goodbye on site. Fireworks and gunfire ascending, exploding Boom into the clutching cloudless steel-blue sky. The heavens in sparkling colorful spiral flowers And sputtering silver glittering showers Falling slowly, burning all the whiles. Smell of sulfur and gunpowder Wafts through the air for miles. My dog trembles as he listens, fearing The repetitiously pop, pop, boom. Leaving little room, he stays Beside me not wanting to play, Staring up with puppy dog eyes In safety, while I stroke his fur to calm him. 12/27/2020

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Date: 12/28/2020 6:33:00 PM
Excitement for some; Misery for others. One person's paradise, another's purgatory. ~ Doggone it!
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Date: 12/28/2020 4:59:00 PM
This is beautiful. The only thing that I am concerned about is your dog. I wanna give him a hug. Happy new year Eve.
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Date: 12/28/2020 12:59:00 PM
our dos both hated fireworks - lovely write that many can relate to
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Date: 12/28/2020 12:49:00 PM
this is nice to read. Our dog does not mind the fireworks sounds at all. isn't it funny how our pets can be as different in personalities as people are?
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Date: 12/27/2020 10:08:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem. It brought back memories of my dogs hiding behind the couch or under the bed. All but Sasha...she loved the fireworks when she could see them in the sky.
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Date: 12/27/2020 8:50:00 AM
You have captured the spirit of the scene quite adequately by the use of your descriptives.
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Date: 12/27/2020 6:00:00 AM
Great description of a fireworky night, Eve, even our dog used to hide.. thank you for my placement in your alliteration contest:)
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Date: 12/27/2020 5:55:00 AM
Well written Eve! I know what that is like, when a dog gets fearful of the loud noise. My dog didn't have a problem, until a neighbor put off a cannon and now she is afraid of thunder and loud noise. My thoughts are with you. Take care :)
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Date: 12/27/2020 5:46:00 AM
Poor Peanuts. I'm glad to see you writing such beautiful poetry. Very descriptive. Stay well. All will pass safely. ~~
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Date: 12/27/2020 3:43:00 AM
Lovely to see Eve but not so nice for pets who are terrified. Tom
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