Fires of Hell

most think of hell
as a place we go
when toils the bell
sending us below

Fiery inferno
white hot flames
engulfing us
bodies burning

For an eternity
wreathing, twisting
paying for sins
done up here

The devil claims
us as his due
inflicting torture
tormenting our soul

This is what we
are led to believe
wait, think on,
forget hells fire's

Listen instead
to that voice within
sometimes a soft whisper
another time a roar

We pay all our lives
one way or another
pricks of consciousness
tearing us apart

People pointing fingers
shame of knowing
that we done wrong
guilt in our minds

These are the flames
that burn deep
consuming us
day to day

Living, remembering
trying to escape
from our wrongs
surely this is hell?

An alternative way of looking at hell I just pose a question nothing else

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/19/2013 12:01:00 PM
I think you're right. '...pricks of consciousness tearing us apart,' so true. There certainly hell here on earth. BRAVO Shadow!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:17:00 PM
ty Keith sometimes its good to think out of the box Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/18/2013 5:06:00 PM
Loved this one too Shadow....very well written...and interesting
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:17:00 PM
hi Donna and ty for reading love the dog Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/18/2013 5:03:00 PM
Your poetry is outstanding I love this poetry poet
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:18:00 PM
ty kind gent glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
Date: 8/18/2013 12:12:00 PM
Deeply penned piece my friend.
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Date: 8/18/2013 3:20:00 PM
Ty dearest M.M a poem to make one think Love Shadow xox smile
Date: 8/16/2013 5:38:00 PM
A great read and philosophy.
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Date: 8/17/2013 4:37:00 AM
Ty Carol glad you liked it Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/16/2013 8:29:00 AM
linda a very beautiful piece of writing I am lost on this site I haven't a clue how to even check out anything
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Date: 8/16/2013 9:48:00 AM
Ty Liam glad you enjoyed try the members area there are links there to most things Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/16/2013 8:02:00 AM
So many are living in hell here on Earth when forgiveness is but a breath away. We can't earn it we just have to ask for it. You have done an excellent job of making people ponder an important topic. Sadly many will carry their hell from this world to the next.
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Date: 8/15/2013 7:47:00 PM
how thought provoking indeed, and I like the point it brings we are all worried what hell is like yet we might as well be living in it, ~always, Linda
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Date: 8/16/2013 7:15:00 AM
hi Linda sometimes its good to think out of the box. Ty for reading Shadow x smiles
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