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Fire's Not Ready To Burn Out

Eyes set as deep as ice,
The rage deep within burns once,
There will be a promising that it will be twice,
Fire is hard to put out
When your body steaming for its pleasure,
All that's on your mind
Is thinking whether will it come out in good measures?
Far as I am concerned,
Sometimes don't really mind
If anyone get's burned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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That Archaic Poet Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Wow. Really powerful piece. Again, I totally related. I have several poems that deal with this exact same kind of issue and "fire" is a prominent theme in many of my pieces. Another wonderful gem you've penned. Enjoyed greatly; kudos :)
Scott Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Thanks for the comment!
Victor Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Great theme makes this a greater poem. Write more. Henry
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