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Fire's Not Ready To Burn Out

Eyes set as deep as ice, The rage deep within burns once, There will be a promising that it will be twice, Fire is hard to put out When your body steaming for its pleasure, All that's on your mind Is thinking whether will it come out in good measures? Far as I am concerned, Sometimes don't really mind If anyone get's burned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2014 11:43:00 AM
Wow. Really powerful piece. Again, I totally related. I have several poems that deal with this exact same kind of issue and "fire" is a prominent theme in many of my pieces. Another wonderful gem you've penned. Enjoyed greatly; kudos :)
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Ashley Scott
Date: 3/20/2014 12:43:00 PM
Thanks for the comment!
Date: 3/19/2014 11:13:00 PM
Great theme makes this a greater poem. Write more. Henry
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