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Firefly Juxtaposition

darkening meadows 
conjure parallel stages- 
lawn chairs on damp grass 
fireflies skittishly eyeing 
the flitting lights of smart phones  

14 Mar 2022

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2022

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June 9, 2022 at 3:11 PM

Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. I don't go out at night enough. LOL..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2022 at 10:11 PM

so interesting how you did your tanka. I love this. Congrats on the win.

Christuraj Alex

March 17, 2022 at 4:37 AM

"skittishly" "flitting" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

March 16, 2022 at 12:31 PM

I like this one and many others in this contest; it was fun. Congratulations.

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