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Firefly Dream

lowering lids on starry eyes velvet black on moonlight smile on silence mantle slept day from work to rest illuming lips stone fire heat love jets fountain drunk head pierce ball exploding in meteors streams vagabond love star wish dream circling forever in firefly spring clock hands embraced in nostalgic glee dew sparks smiles that sigh and flee vagabond ecstasy love spring mystery Honorable Mention-Brian Strand-Your Choice K-4/8/25 Seventh Place: Craic Cornish-Vagabond Dream-9/10/21

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/13/2021 11:11:00 AM

What a lovely warm, dreamy and romantic vision to sink into - to wrapt ourselves in - to wander about in, Frances. Congratulations on your win!

Frances Schiavina
Date: 9/14/2021 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Sam for understanding and clearly capturing essence of Firefly Dream in your comment. You filled me with happiness! And may all your dreams not come true unless they are filled with playful fun and happiness.

Carol Mitra

Date: 9/11/2021 5:14:00 AM

I always thought too that fireflies have a certain mystery to them....loved the poem dear Frances:)

Frances Schiavina
Date: 9/15/2021 7:13:00 AM

Thank you Carol for insightful comment on mystery of fireflies, invisible except for their light; like our hidden God manifest through light of His love.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/10/2021 11:53:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Frances Schiavina
Date: 9/17/2021 7:29:00 AM

I am honored by you reading my poem Beata. Thank you for congratulations and blessings.