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one fine day they changed places fireflies lit daytime shadows while butterflies splashed the night a shrewd color scheme bright hues and exotic moon flittering and fluttering pure rapture under the stars midnight was dreaming the firefly shadows twinkled above the enraptured blooms the fervent day seemed to pause in search of the moon

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Date: 10/24/2020 9:44:00 PM
This is beautiful, has wonderful flow. I played the music as I read it and it was very pleasant.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/25/2020 9:20:00 AM
It's so rewarding to know that you enjoyed both the poem and the music. Thank you very much.
Date: 10/24/2020 6:13:00 PM
Oh, is this ever creative and full of creative ideas! It's going right into my FAVES. Thank you! ~ A Doditsu to be treasured, Evelyn. :) gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2020 8:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for the uplifting words, Gershon. I'm very honored that my poem will be among your FAVES. Thanks for letting me know. :)
Date: 10/24/2020 4:20:00 AM
Love the music and video... Three doditsu full of imagery.. My favourite is the last one..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2020 9:29:00 AM
That is wonderful to know. Thank you. :)
Date: 10/23/2020 10:47:00 PM
Such euphoria in this poem. I have been house bound far too long. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2020 9:28:00 AM
A wonderful aspect of nature is that it's always there waiting. Thank you. :)
Date: 10/23/2020 8:47:00 PM
I am enchanted by the magic of your beautiful and vivid imagery, Evelyn. Your enrapturing pen is a pleasure to behold. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2020 9:26:00 AM
I'm so glad you like the music, Susan. Thanks for letting me know. :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/23/2020 9:05:00 PM
And the joy shines through your words, Evelyn. BTW, the musical accompaniment to your poem is wonderful too!:)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/23/2020 9:00:00 PM
I am truly thrilled by your wonderful remarks, Susan. Writing is my joy. Thank you.

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