Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Dodoitsu

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Firefly Days, Butterfly Nights

one fine day they changed places
fireflies lit daytime shadows
while butterflies splashed the night
a shrewd color scheme

bright hues and exotic moon
flittering and fluttering
pure rapture under the stars
midnight was dreaming

the firefly shadows twinkled
above the enraptured blooms
the fervent day seemed to pause
in search of the moon

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M. L. Kiser October 24, 2020 at 9:44 PM This is beautiful, has wonderful flow. I played the music as I read it and it was very pleasant. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 25, 2020 at 9:20 AM It's so rewarding to know that you enjoyed both the poem and the music. Thank you very much.

Gershon Wolf October 24, 2020 at 6:13 PM Oh, is this ever creative and full of creative ideas! It's going right into my FAVES. Thank you! ~ A Doditsu to be treasured, Evelyn. :) gw Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2020 at 8:15 PM Thank you so much for the uplifting words, Gershon. I'm very honored that my poem will be among your FAVES. Thanks for letting me know. :)

Silent One October 24, 2020 at 4:20 AM Love the music and video... Three doditsu full of imagery.. My favourite is the last one.. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2020 at 9:29 AM That is wonderful to know. Thank you. :)

Victor Buhagiar October 23, 2020 at 10:47 PM Such euphoria in this poem. I have been house bound far too long. ~~ Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2020 at 9:28 AM A wonderful aspect of nature is that it's always there waiting. Thank you. :)

Susan Ashley October 23, 2020 at 8:47 PM I am enchanted by the magic of your beautiful and vivid imagery, Evelyn. Your enrapturing pen is a pleasure to behold. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2020 at 9:26 AM I'm so glad you like the music, Susan. Thanks for letting me know. :) Susan Ashley October 23, 2020 at 9:05 PM And the joy shines through your words, Evelyn. BTW, the musical accompaniment to your poem is wonderful too!:) Evelyn Judy Buehler October 23, 2020 at 9:00 PM I am truly thrilled by your wonderful remarks, Susan. Writing is my joy. Thank you.