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Fireflies of Lies

Fireflies of lies souring high, where pristine truth couldn't follow nigh Like stupid ant sorting out, sand and sugar in just a kiss I caught fireflies amid fallen leaves, blowing for fire of truth.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2020 10:21:00 AM

Very interesting work. Creative..Did you find the truth? Sara

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/5/2020 12:39:00 AM

No..Still blowing the fireflies for a fire..Thank you Sara..

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/29/2020 8:36:00 AM

Very calming, cool sijo/sigo. I enjoyed the trip back to my childhood and less far back to my grandchildren discovering fireflies.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/29/2020 11:00:00 PM

Thank you Reason...

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/25/2020 8:31:00 PM

This is suich a magical poem! I love poems about fireflies and this one is really captivating .. Best wishes.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/26/2020 12:01:00 AM

Thank you Burl..There is a story about a monkey, caught a firefly, put under some dried leaves and tried to blow fire out of it..Now watching the news, I'm catching lies and blowing truth out of it..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/24/2020 10:49:00 PM

Your Poems are very poetic and enhanced by the lovely pictures that embrace the poetry sets a magical scene for the reader. Thank you Jenish

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/25/2020 12:16:00 AM

Thank you Shirley..Your comments are inspirations in installment..