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Fireflies In Flight

Under a canopy of lime and teal, Nature creates a hazy, dreamlike scene; as dappled light fuels the surreal. And with an ethereal spectral sheen: the leaves appear gilded: no longer green. Orange carpets the barren hoarfrost ground, creating a hypnotic, trancelike feel; treading upon Death's skin, crackled and browned. And the frosty nights have a frigid feel; even though Autumn seems so ideal. A fantasy of color and shadows; highlighted by scattered beams of sunlight: colored leaves are destined to decompose. And yet, like flickering fireflies in flight: they compete with the twinkling stars at night.
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La France Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Emile, reading this poem again is pure delight, and is a wonderful example for your new contest too ~Constance
Pinet Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 4:47 PM
Thanks, Constance, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Beautiful imagery, Emile, and I love English Quintain. You did it perfectly! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Pinet Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Kim, as always, I love to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Holmes Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 12:58 PM
Emile - Congratulations on your win - this is an amazing work. I really enjoyed this poem, David
Pinet Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Thanks David, I appreciate your comments, you brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 10:39 PM
Emile, great way of using the challenge words giving your poem a serene feel and beautiful look. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
Pinet Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Emile, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like the image too, peace - Constance
Pinet Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Thanks Constance, your contest are always so interesting and provide my muse with the fuel to write, Emile.
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 11:57 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Thanks Christuraj, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Beautiful writing, Emile, filled with surreal, but inviting images. A winner, I think!
Pinet Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Thanks Milt, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
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