Fireflies Dance

Lovers kiss under
a full moon, as fireflies dance
among  the trees
While  sounds of crickets chirping
Play a lovely melody
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 24, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Thank you Joseph, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
Magnet Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 11:51 PM
For those who have lived the experience, this poem is so much more touching. I can also hear the crickets chirping, nightfall.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Joseph xx
A   Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 8:44 PM
Joseph :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:07 PM
I'm happy to see this made the winners' list, Joseph. Wonderful.
Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:57 PM
an idealic scene! Light & Love
May Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 7:08 AM
thank you Debbie
Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 6:19 AM
Very expressive and descriptive depicting the romantic..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great job..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
May Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 2:52 PM
thank you Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:54 PM
It's very pretty, Joseph. For Susan's contest?
May Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:33 AM
thank you Andrea...yes
A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:47 PM
love your tanka, romantic, with a good upcoming sound..pd
May Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:33 AM
thank you PD
Komala Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 8:18 PM
so sweet...enjoyed so much your lovely verse thank you Joseph for nice sharing <3<3<3 :) SK
May Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Thank you SK..
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