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Fireflies and Stars' Twinkle

Fireflies earth's closest star twinkle Twinkle stars galaxies away Away heat cool off rain sprinkle Sprinkle moisture then cool stay Stay fireflies_stars summer's magic Magic of warm early night's display Display at eve hypnogogic Hypnogogic time underway Underway night great twilight time Time of magic wonder sprinkle Sprinkle starlight stardust night's rhyme Rhyme's song _ fireflies and star's twinkle > Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Wreath On The Flavor of Dusk Written by: Sara Kendrick August 15, 2012

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Lea Pidgeon

Date: 8/23/2012 4:42:00 PM

I forgot that I wanted to rate your poem so I have to message again.

Lea Pidgeon

Date: 8/23/2012 4:40:00 PM

You obviously know more about different forms of poetry than I. I'm not really a poet I just need to express myself sometimes. People don't always want to hear what's on your mind, in your heart, or weighing hevy on your soul. After reading your poem I remember lighthearted days catching, and releasing fireflies. Born in California, lived in Utah, Arizona, then Missouri, the fireflies were magical to me. I should write more lighthearted poems myself. Thank You, Lea

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/21/2012 11:49:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Sara xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/19/2012 8:32:00 PM

Magical and beautiful poem here. Congrats to you on your win!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/19/2012 2:44:00 PM

Beautiful rhyme of fireflies and stars, both twinkle. Loved always, bl

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 1:49:00 AM

Sara belated congrats on your win...David

Kash Poet

Date: 8/18/2012 11:36:00 AM

Wow Sara you have done it in rhyming form also..A great write.congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2012 11:27:00 AM

congratulations for your big win with your twinkling dusk wreath poem, Sara. WAy to go.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2012 8:54:00 AM

sara, you light dusk with firefly delight!... super congrats on your wonderful win in my contest!.:) huggs!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/18/2012 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning wreath. I love the fireflies.

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/16/2012 6:29:00 PM

Good luck to you in the contest, my friend... should do extremely well! Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

The Situation

Date: 8/16/2012 1:50:00 PM

great job on the style. in the winners circle i know.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/16/2012 1:44:00 PM

I just can't get started on this one! Love the way you've written yours, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2012 8:55:00 AM

Magic in your beautiful poem Sara, luck to you in the contest. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/16/2012 7:58:00 AM

This is beautiful. It shows great imagination. Fireflies and twinkle stars. I like that. They use to say that if filled up a jar with fireflies, it could lite up a whole room. I never tried it, but some people did. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

David Williams

Date: 8/16/2012 4:01:00 AM

Sara excellent write, I like it and good luck..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:00:00 PM

Sara, this is amusing,,, love the quality of the image...good luck in the contest..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2012 8:24:00 PM

It was nice how you got your wreath poem rhyming, Sara. Love those fireflies and twinkles!!

Cory Long

Date: 8/15/2012 7:43:00 PM

this was a great example of this form..Good luck in the contest cory

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/15/2012 5:41:00 PM

This is a perfect Wreath poem my friend! You sure did go for the gold with this write! I really enjoyed this grandiose poem that you have written Sara! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!