Sara Kendrick Poet Verse

Fireflies and Stars' Twinkle

Fireflies earth's closest star twinkle
Twinkle stars galaxies away
Away heat cool off rain sprinkle
Sprinkle moisture then cool stay

Stay fireflies_stars summer's magic
Magic of warm early night's display
Display at eve hypnogogic
Hypnogogic time underway

Underway night great twilight time
Time of magic wonder sprinkle
Sprinkle starlight stardust night's rhyme
Rhyme's song _ fireflies and star's twinkle  >

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Wreath On The Flavor of Dusk
Written by: Sara Kendrick
August 15, 2012

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Lea Pidgeon August 23, 2012 at 4:42 PM I forgot that I wanted to rate your poem so I have to message again.

Lea Pidgeon August 23, 2012 at 4:40 PM You obviously know more about different forms of poetry than I. I'm not really a poet I just need to express myself sometimes. People don't always want to hear what's on your mind, in your heart, or weighing hevy on your soul. After reading your poem I remember lighthearted days catching, and releasing fireflies. Born in California, lived in Utah, Arizona, then Missouri, the fireflies were magical to me. I should write more lighthearted poems myself. Thank You, Lea

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 21, 2012 at 11:49 AM Many congratulations on your win Sara xx

Carol Sunshine Brown August 21, 2012 at 6:58 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Doreen Wright August 19, 2012 at 8:32 PM Magical and beautiful poem here. Congrats to you on your win!!

Bl Devnath August 19, 2012 at 2:44 PM Beautiful rhyme of fireflies and stars, both twinkle. Loved always, bl

David Williams August 19, 2012 at 1:49 AM Sara belated congrats on your win...David

Kash Poet August 18, 2012 at 11:36 AM Wow Sara you have done it in rhyming form also..A great write.congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2012 at 11:27 AM congratulations for your big win with your twinkling dusk wreath poem, Sara. WAy to go.

Nette Onclaud August 18, 2012 at 8:54 AM sara, you light dusk with firefly delight!... super congrats on your wonderful win in my contest!.:) huggs!

Joann Grisetti August 18, 2012 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your winning wreath. I love the fireflies.

Jack Ellison August 16, 2012 at 6:29 PM Good luck to you in the contest, my friend... should do extremely well! Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

The Situation August 16, 2012 at 1:50 PM great job on the style. in the winners circle i know.

Jack Horne August 16, 2012 at 1:44 PM I just can't get started on this one! Love the way you've written yours, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2012 at 8:55 AM Magic in your beautiful poem Sara, luck to you in the contest. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo August 16, 2012 at 7:58 AM This is beautiful. It shows great imagination. Fireflies and twinkle stars. I like that. They use to say that if filled up a jar with fireflies, it could lite up a whole room. I never tried it, but some people did. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

David Williams August 16, 2012 at 4:01 AM Sara excellent write, I like it and good luck..David

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2012 at 11:00 PM Sara, this is amusing,,, love the quality of the image...good luck in the contest..pd

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2012 at 8:24 PM It was nice how you got your wreath poem rhyming, Sara. Love those fireflies and twinkles!!

Cory Long August 15, 2012 at 7:43 PM this was a great example of this form..Good luck in the contest cory

Russell Sivey August 15, 2012 at 5:41 PM This is a perfect Wreath poem my friend! You sure did go for the gold with this write! I really enjoyed this grandiose poem that you have written Sara! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!