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Fireflies

lights in the dark sky happenstance they will glow fierce nature's sparks of life they group together by love and dance through the quiet night

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Date: 3/22/2022 11:51:00 AM
Robert, This tanka is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/22/2022 9:26:00 AM
A beautiful Tanka! "nature's sparks of life" - that's how they really are! Congratulations for the win.
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Date: 3/21/2022 8:11:00 PM
"they group together by love, and dance through the quiet night." So dreamy and romantic. There is something magical about fireflies, the way they light up the night. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:26:00 PM
this is beautiful. Congrats for the win, Robert.
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Date: 3/17/2022 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful "Fireflies" write. Nature puts on a show each night. Today, be blessed with your win..........
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Date: 3/17/2022 4:51:00 AM
"happenstance" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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