Afolabi Muideen Poet Acrostic

Firecrackers

FIREBREAKERS


F~actional bapus fight for independence with loyalty to their country, their
I~dealism of independence that become
R~eality, which made oppression in heart of the people to vanish
E~aseful pandemonium broke out throughout the
C~ountry and people rejoice
R~ejoice and rejoice, their
A~ction marked the beginning of development of our nation also
C~reated good lines for the incoming generations to follow, their names were being
K~ept in history because their names will be remembered
E~very time of independence celebrating
R~emembering them reawaken the memory of the past judged with the present to give
S~cintillating celebration. Happy independence to my country.

7-13-2015
Contest by celebrate independence
Sponsor by Kim Merrmam

Bapus means father

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James Inman July 25, 2015 at 3:16 PM Heartfelt, well done.

Kp Nunez July 24, 2015 at 10:00 AM Congratulations, AM! soup mail

Jan Allison July 23, 2015 at 5:05 PM A lovely acrostic Afolabi - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman July 23, 2015 at 10:27 AM Afolabi, thank you for sharing the history of your country's independence with this acrostic! Great work! Congrats on your win in my contest! Love, Kim

Alexis Y. July 23, 2015 at 9:11 AM Hi Afolabie,I just stopped congratulations by to say on your awesome win:-) Alexis

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 23, 2015 at 2:08 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Afolabi! Powerful acrostic!

Skat A July 23, 2015 at 12:40 AM Afolabi, congratulations on your win. Awesome Acrostic. Love SKAT

Kp Nunez July 20, 2015 at 11:40 PM :-))) reading the comments, I'm happy for you, my friend. PS. You may wish to put a footnote for the meaning of bapus for those like ,e who do not understand it.

Debbie Guzzi July 18, 2015 at 8:17 AM Well done acrostic good luck in the contest. Thanks for stopping by my verse. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 17, 2015 at 5:56 AM Afolabi, good flowing lines.. !!! Well-written~Olive Eloisa =')

Alexis Y. July 15, 2015 at 10:46 PM Afolabi, I enjoyed every word and verse of your celebratory acrostic. Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Poet Destroyer A July 15, 2015 at 4:05 PM enjoyed your acrostic, Luv p.d.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 15, 2015 at 7:41 AM A celebration of national pride and recognition of the sacrifices people made to achieve independence! Excellent acrostic dear, A.M.

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2015 at 3:04 PM Enjoyed reading your work..It is good to remember and to celebrate the forming of one's country or nation..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Sara

Constance La France July 14, 2015 at 11:30 AM AM, very nicely done for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances ....

Ovidiu Bocsa July 14, 2015 at 3:03 AM Well done.Congrat.An unforgettable holiday is your poem.

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2015 at 10:55 PM way to write an acrostic with firecrackers. I too chose that same word!!

Nette Onclaud July 13, 2015 at 4:35 PM Bright piece exalting your pride for country and fellowmen,afolabi.. huggs

Arabian Poet July 13, 2015 at 1:10 PM Excellent writing and really like your way of presenting those people

Bl Devnath July 13, 2015 at 10:53 AM Beautiful poem on celebration of independence painted with beautiful colors of freedom. Loved always my lovely friend,bl