Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

- Fire Trucks and Love -

Deep love
                                                Real love
                                       Heart feels like will crack
                                   Hearts burning for each other
                                       Do not call the fire truck
                         This fire can not be extinguished with water
                                    Let it burn forever and ever







08.10.2013
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Saanvi Dua December 11, 2013 at 3:19 AM Enjoyed this poem of yours ! Thanks for your lovely and encouraging comments on my poem ! Love , Saanvi : ) Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2013 at 3:41 AM - Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Saanvi, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton October 20, 2013 at 8:10 AM very, very good Anne Lise a great tribute to love Shadow x smile Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2013 at 8:12 AM - Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Shadow, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell October 14, 2013 at 6:26 AM Haha, too funny, Anne-Lise. Yeah, don't call it. Let this fire consume us :). Have a great new week!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2013 at 8:43 AM - Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Toquyen, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards October 12, 2013 at 2:48 PM Some fires smolder and are ever-lasting. Let us hope this one never dies!! Nicely done!! ps......thank you so much for the kindest comment I have received in a long time!! You are so sweet. Happy weekend to you too! Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2013 at 2:56 PM - Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Carrie, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane October 12, 2013 at 11:37 AM Anne Lise, such a lovely and sweet write. Nothing can extinguish real love...so true! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2013 at 11:47 AM - Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Cecilia, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser October 12, 2013 at 8:43 AM Sometimes all the firemen can do is stand back and watch er burn, way to hot, nice write Annee, blessings Carl Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2013 at 8:51 AM - Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Carl, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey October 11, 2013 at 4:36 PM I like the simile between firetrucks and love. Very creative ! 'Let love burn'...nice ! Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2013 at 4:08 AM - Thank you for taking some of your time to read my poem Karen, really appreciate it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels October 11, 2013 at 6:33 AM hehe let it burn, I totally agree with you Anne-Lise :) xoxo Anne-Lise Andresen October 11, 2013 at 6:34 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Wilma, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard D Seal October 10, 2013 at 3:39 PM Fire trucks not needed here Anne Lise, lovely little write. Take care, Richard Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2013 at 4:24 PM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Richard, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Ryerson October 10, 2013 at 5:41 AM Oh yes indeed my friend...Let it burn! LOVE the title and the fire truck analogy... By the way, I'm a volunteer fireman just in case - Tim Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2013 at 5:44 AM - I do not need a fireman, but it was nice of you! - Highly appreciate your words Tim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :))))

Len Gasun October 10, 2013 at 1:59 AM Yes, I will not call the fire truck my dearest friend Anne Lise. I will watch that fire keeps on burning;))))))). A very lovely and great poem which delighted me so much this afternoon. so love it my dear friend of mine. Thank you so much for sharing! I'm so glad I've stopped by & read this precious gem of yours this afternoon. Thank you thank you so much for sharing and for everything! love much & biggest sweet hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2013 at 4:13 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Leonora, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams October 9, 2013 at 8:39 PM the best kind of fire to let burn...wonderful write Anne-Lise, glad I stopped by to read :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2013 at 4:12 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Sandra, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick October 9, 2013 at 6:21 PM Like the metaphoric language..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2013 at 4:12 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Sara, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo October 9, 2013 at 4:42 PM A short poem, but beautiful to read. You are so right. That fire should burn forever. Thanks Anne Lise..... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2013 at 4:11 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Lucilla, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath October 9, 2013 at 2:35 PM Oh! my friend, you have touched the unknown region of feeling of heart where burning never ends. At last what happens, I don't know. God knows only of it. Beautiful all the ways. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 2:59 PM - Thank you for your visit and your comment bl, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko October 9, 2013 at 11:54 AM Really a touching one :), Thanks Anne for you visit today, I'm about 5 months now, and thank God all well :D, I've been busy with my students' midterm semester exam lately, how are you Anne? Wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 12:01 PM - I'm fine. - An exciting time .... can not wait to be "Grandma" :)))) - Good luck with the last few months! - Thank you for your visit and your comment Yanny, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll October 9, 2013 at 11:42 AM Hi Anne, Nice write from you...On love, let the flames begin!, Ken Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 11:46 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Ken, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud October 9, 2013 at 11:33 AM sweet passion prevails within this enchanting work ,anne... love how you ended this; terrific!.. have a red day!..:) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 11:35 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Nette, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh October 9, 2013 at 11:14 AM I think you and your husband have such a love. Thank you for sharing. Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 11:16 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Jon, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Litan Dey October 9, 2013 at 10:46 AM I think no one can burn his/her love unless dear one in paain.May be you want to tell some love like that.Loved it.... Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 11:09 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Litan, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason October 9, 2013 at 8:07 AM may your love burn eternal. Warm thoughts, Ralph Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 11:09 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Ralph, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 9, 2013 at 4:32 AM An eternal love fire:) Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 4:34 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Vandana, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2013 at 1:05 AM cute idea. Don't call the fire truck. Let passion burn! Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 3:31 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Andrea, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey October 8, 2013 at 10:29 PM Wow, you have touched my soul with this heartfelt write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! You have delighted me by the splendor of this wonderful piece, Great work!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 3:31 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Russell, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn October 8, 2013 at 8:40 PM Cool write i enjoyed it and also thanks for your comments. I loved writting the poem for poet destroyer but my true win is her friendship. Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 3:30 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comment Cherl, very nice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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