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Written July 4, 2023 10.58am

Fire Trees

engulf all green leaves 
shades of orange and dark red…
grand bright flower balls

range from the distance
replicating summer sun…
big bees’ lollipops

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Karen Croft

July 28, 2024 at 9:17 PM

I love it! I am a big haiku person

Sam Kauffman

July 14, 2023 at 10:29 AM

My dearest friend Len, what a delight especially "big bees' lollipops." Your wonderful haiku set pops with color and the bright sun of summer and takes our eyes into their enchantment! Such a creative view and point of view, dear friend! Congratulations on your win! You have truly captured summer's delight! Sending you blessings of summer joy!

Kim Merryman

July 12, 2023 at 6:49 PM

Creative imagery, Len! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

July 12, 2023 at 11:54 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 12, 2023 at 9:56 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Leonora :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

July 12, 2023 at 5:39 AM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement, colorful imagery!

Bill Baker

July 4, 2023 at 4:01 PM

Lovely imagery in your Haiku today, Len. You do beauty, just right. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Len Gasun

July 5, 2023 at 7:45 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend Bill. May God bless you always. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 4, 2023 at 3:06 AM

- A sweet "heaven" for the bees ... lovely written, Leonora :) - hugs

Len Gasun

July 5, 2023 at 7:44 PM

You're right my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments. God bless you always. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

July 3, 2023 at 10:19 PM

I loved the ending. Well done.

Len Gasun

July 5, 2023 at 7:43 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comment my dear poet friend Victor. God bless you always. Hugs

Eve Roper

July 3, 2023 at 9:15 PM

you reminded me of the activity outside fireworks exploding scarring the poor dogs for the 4th of July.

Len Gasun

July 17, 2023 at 4:37 PM

A Summer Haiku x 2 - Nature Themed Contest Judged: 7/12/2023 5:07:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin PLACE 3- (UP TO 4 MULTI-W)

Len Gasun

July 3, 2023 at 10:04 PM

Oh, is it? ha ha ha... but that's how fire trees bloom here this summer my dear poet friend. Thanks for reading my poem and your comment my dear Eve. Happy 4th of July. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Fire Trees

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