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Fire Operatie

FIRE OPERATIE. (operatie is Dutch word for operation in English) F ine matter in combustion with oxygen too luculent, I ncandescent fire's poise flares up its ligament. R esourceful if used with a well crafted stroke, E nds up in its originality into a smoke. Barbeque pomfret dances on the hot grill plate, Fella operant is harum scarum,focus drifts to marr, Fish a dish untowardly gets blackish straight, Penchant of the palate now becomes a scar. Water cycle disturbed,soil has furious fire, Ex improviso calamities,lava,firestorms dig deep, Diseases new to skin pop up,scorching rays conspire, Greed of us if controlled,time again will reap. Flambeau flickers soothing fire,inner heart purges, So many wants wanted,this is what one urges. Contest:Elements Part 4. Sponsor:Brian Davey. 01/05/2016

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Date: 5/12/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you.....regards
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Date: 5/11/2016 4:41:00 PM
Well done. I loved the alternating rhyme scheme. Nice placing.
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Date: 5/11/2016 2:40:00 AM
Thank you....regards
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Date: 5/6/2016 11:28:00 AM
Hi Rizwana!! Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/4/2016 12:04:00 PM
Thank you.....best wishes
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Date: 5/4/2016 9:46:00 AM
Congratulation on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/3/2016 8:28:00 PM
what a unique write this was with the wording used throughout this wonderful poem! Congrats on your placement in my contest, well deserved
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 5/4/2016 12:09:00 PM
Grateful for your uplifting words...my pleasure to be a part of this wonderful contest...you judges make us write what we never have imagined ,,,thank you...regards
Date: 5/3/2016 7:51:00 PM
Many interesting visuals!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 5/4/2016 12:11:00 PM
your humble words encourage me,,,,thank you....regards
Date: 5/3/2016 6:32:00 PM
Very well done, Rizwana! Congratulations on your fine win in the 'element of fire' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 5/4/2016 12:11:00 PM
thank you for your appreciation....regards
Date: 5/3/2016 7:45:00 AM
I always have trouble with AB AB sonnets rhymes. Nice entry.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 5/4/2016 12:14:00 PM
thank you.....if you dont mind I LL suggest...1st write ab line then search for the rhyme of ab and then compose the other two...best wishes
Date: 5/1/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you SIR.....I have used a Dutch word for operation.... I ll still check in...
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